New Year's kiss - my new poem

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New Year's kiss - my new poem

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New Year's kiss

Standing on the balcony
Waiting for the fireworks
You're with me my dear honey
Heaven in me it evokes

Turning to me with a smile
Holding your hand touching mine
Gentle kiss world stopped awhile
What follows is joyous shine
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21

For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6

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Beautiful!

Thank you for sharing this. I enjoy poetry and you write very well.
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God's precious Hana

You rhyme in such a lovely manner

Your intelligence astounds

The love you show others, abounds

And you're a great little poet

Even if you don't quite know it 8)
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RickD wrote:God's precious Hana

You rhyme in such a lovely manner

Your intelligence astounds

The love you show others, abounds

And you're a great little poet

Even if you don't quite know it 8)
y:O2 y:D :troll: :bag:
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21

For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6

#foreverinmyheart
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God's precious Hana

You rhyme in such a lovely manner

Your intelligence astounds

The love you show others, abounds

And you're a great little poet

Even if you don't quite know it
:cheers:
It would be a blessing if they missed the cairns and got lost on the way back. Or if
the Thing on the ice got them tonight.

I could only turn and stare in horror at the chief surgeon.
Death by starvation is a terrible thing, Goodsir, continued Stanley.
And with that we went below to the flame-flickering Darkness of the lower deck
and to a cold almost the equal of the Dante-esque Ninth Circle Arctic Night
without.


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