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My tiny poem: Love given

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Love given

World broken
Word spoken
Love given
Hearts driven

P.S. tiny but big
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21

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Boom!!!! CANT GET NO BETTER
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1over137 wrote:Love given

World broken
Word spoken
Love given
Hearts driven

P.S. tiny but big
Would make a great song :amen:
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1over137 wrote:Love given

World broken
Word spoken
Love given
Hearts driven
Why does she have all the talent? God isn't fair! y[-(

FL
Hold everything lightly. If you don't, it will hurt when God pries your fingers loose as He takes it from you. -Corrie Ten Boom

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Come on. Everybody has. You too. Maybe something you do not know about.
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21

For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
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Hana, you forgot FL is Canadian. :pound:
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I must apologize to FL for saying he's not gifted because he's Canadian. I forgot that all Canadians are adept at beer drinking, hockey watching, and igloo making. Oh, and polar bear breeding.
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24 “Truly, truly, I say to you, he who hears My word, and believes Him who sent Me, has eternal life, and does not come into judgment, but has passed out of death into life.


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Rick, I believe FL will tell you something back :ebiggrin:
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21

For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6

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RickD wrote:I must apologize to FL for saying he's not gifted because he's Canadian. I forgot that all Canadians are adept at beer drinking, hockey watching, and igloo making. Oh, and polar bear breeding.
Here is my poem:

Ode To Canada

Didn't get our Welfare money
It didn't come in th' mail, Honey
But we don't need to worry
Medical bills we don't got to pay
'cause this is Canada, eh?

With Barack's Obamacare
Ya still gotta pay your share
So Americans can't be sick
Without being hit by a brick...

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Move over, Queen of Slobovia. There's a new talent in poetry.

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With Barack's Obamacare
Ya still gotta pay your share
So Americans can't be sick
Without being hit by a brick...
Ain't that the truth!

If you think healthcare is expensive now, just wait until it's "free"!
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Roses are grey
Violets are grey
I am a dog
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Here's one that really hits home, right FL?

Roses are red
violets are blue
I am schizophrenic
and so am I
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Love the poem Hana, what I love about it is it's simplicity and the story it tells with that simplicity.

God is truly love and love is never complicated, only we make it complicated.
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Here is a trustworthy saying that deserves full acceptance: Christ Jesus came into the world to save sinners of whom I am the worst. But for that very reason I was shown mercy so that in me, the worst of sinners, Christ Jesus might display his immense patience as an example for those who would believe in him and receive eternal life. Now to the King eternal, immortal, invisible, the only God, be honor and glory for ever and ever.Amen.
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Danieltwotwenty wrote:Love the poem Hana, what I love about it is it's simplicity and the story it tells with that simplicity.

God is truly love and love is never complicated, only we make it complicated.
Thank you Dan :)
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
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For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
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