Imagine
Imagine the times in heaven
When there's no hungry wolfish ravens
Which may sometimes be in us
Thus may friendships go to dust.
Imagine there's only laughter
Imagine that all are after
Loving others, spreading joy
Non-interested in the ploys.
Imagine all in one accord
No one having his own record
All wrong-doings are forgiven
All people are warm-heart-driven.
Imagine this one day comes true
Isn't that a wonderful view?
Isn't that what we are after?
Love, compassion, friendship, laughter?
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P.S.: let me know when there's some English grammatical error.
Poem - Imagine
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Poem - Imagine
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21
For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6
#foreverinmyheart
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21
For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6
#foreverinmyheart
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melanie
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Re: Poem - Imagine
I think it's a beautiful poem, Heartfelt and your expression, thank you for sharing it.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
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1over137
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Thank you.melanie wrote:I think it's a beautiful poem, Heartfelt and your expression, thank you for sharing it.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
I have some more in this General Chit Chat too.
Whole collection is on my homepage. Just check my profile.
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21
For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6
#foreverinmyheart
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21
For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6
#foreverinmyheart
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Furstentum Liechtenstein
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Re: Poem - Imagine
Nice poem! Your English is good.
FL
FL
Hold everything lightly. If you don't, it will hurt when God pries your fingers loose as He takes it from you. -Corrie Ten Boom
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If they had a social gospel in the days of the prodigal son, somebody would have given him a bed and a sandwich and he never would have gone home.
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If they had a social gospel in the days of the prodigal son, somebody would have given him a bed and a sandwich and he never would have gone home.
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melanie
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Re: Poem - Imagine
I read them, they are really good1over137 wrote:Thank you.melanie wrote:I think it's a beautiful poem, Heartfelt and your expression, thank you for sharing it.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
I have some more in this General Chit Chat too.
Whole collection is on my homepage. Just check my profile.
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Thanks teacher FLFurstentum Liechtenstein wrote:Nice poem! Your English is good.
FL
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21
For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6
#foreverinmyheart
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21
For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6
#foreverinmyheart
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1over137
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Thank you.melanie wrote:I read them, they are really good1over137 wrote:Thank you.melanie wrote:I think it's a beautiful poem, Heartfelt and your expression, thank you for sharing it.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
I have some more in this General Chit Chat too.
Whole collection is on my homepage. Just check my profile.
I started writing poems after I became Christian.
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21
For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6
#foreverinmyheart
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21
For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6
#foreverinmyheart