Sorry if I came across to harsh. MY own personal style is to seek to communicate clearly instead of used puffed up words.
I think you were trying to tell me that your long experince with breeding is that you have been able to improve your animal with sound diet, and a good sexual partner. I too breed dogs, and know that I can improve my dogs by sound diet, and breeding choice individuals, or individuals that complement.
I think you were trying to use your selective breeding program as an example of natural selection. IT is not.
I'm sorry that you felt attacked I was just trying to point out the fact that your were using some jargon and rather meaningless words and that you were failing to communicate with me.
If you would rather sound pretty in your own ears than be able to clearly demonstrate your meanings, than that is your business. I have included some links to help you to understand how simpler words are better at actually communicating ideas. Since I haven't got my cave wired yet, you will have to wait and I can post more links for you so that you can understand how pretty words are not as good as clear communication.
3. Avoid affectations and fancy words. For example: The second statement follows mutatis mutandis from the first. The phrase mutatis mutandis (= "with corresponding changes") is, indeed, an impressive phrase, but it is also baffling to most readers. Avoid fanciful and pretentious vocabulary. The following extract from an autobiography of the French mathematician André Weil illustrates just how bad affective writing can be:
My life, or at least what deserves this name—a singularly happy life, its diverse vicissitudes withal—is bounded by my birth on May 6, 1906, and the death on May 24, 1986, of my wife and companion.
It may be argued that clever phrasing and curious words make reading more interesting, and to deny an author their use limits his tools and leads to mundane writing. This is the argument of a novice who confuses poetry and song lyrics with formal prose. Both of the previous examples are demonstrations of bad communication, because the words distract from the ideas. Writers who choose words and phrases like this are treating writing as an art form much like dancing—as an end unto itself—rather than as a tool to express ideas.
Samuel Johnson once recalled the following remark from a college tutor: “Read over your compositions, and wherever you meet with a passage that you think is particularly fine, strike it out." This, I think, is one of the great pieces of advice for beginners. Whenever a reader begins to notice the writing instead of the ideas carried by the writing, then the reader is being distracted.
4. Stick with the action, not the abstraction. Maybe this will help: After writing each sentence, imagine your boss, red-faced and screaming: “What are you talking about? I can't understand you! Get to the point!” Minimize, and be concise. Your writing, like mine, is of interest only for the facts it brings the reader. Even most of those who dedicate their lives to the craft of writing don't write particularly well. Bear in mind that your perspectives are rarely interesting to anyone else. (A striking exception, of course, is this article.)
http://www.llrx.com/columns/grammar13.htm
Of the Abuse of Words
http://www.rbjones.com/rbjpub/philos/cl ... tb3c10.htm
(mild language)
Notes On Unnecessary Complexity On Communication; Or, What The **** Are You Saying?
Many people use big words to make themselves or their ideas sound important (or to obscure the meaning and make it sound pleasant or desirable). It may also be the case that people use big words to sound more important and make their opinions seem more significant (6). But that could then mean that the Left is essentially a clique and people are scrambling for status in a movement that is theoretically devoid of status or class ...
http://www.punkrockacademy.com/stm/essa ... ation.html