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New Year's kiss - my new poem

Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 11:14 am
by 1over137
New Year's kiss

Standing on the balcony
Waiting for the fireworks
You're with me my dear honey
Heaven in me it evokes

Turning to me with a smile
Holding your hand touching mine
Gentle kiss world stopped awhile
What follows is joyous shine

Re: New Year's kiss - my new poem

Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 11:16 am
by Canuckster1127
Beautiful!

Thank you for sharing this. I enjoy poetry and you write very well.

Re: New Year's kiss - my new poem

Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 3:10 pm
by RickD
God's precious Hana

You rhyme in such a lovely manner

Your intelligence astounds

The love you show others, abounds

And you're a great little poet

Even if you don't quite know it 8)

Re: New Year's kiss - my new poem

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2013 1:34 am
by 1over137
RickD wrote:God's precious Hana

You rhyme in such a lovely manner

Your intelligence astounds

The love you show others, abounds

And you're a great little poet

Even if you don't quite know it 8)
y:O2 y:D :troll: :bag:

Re: New Year's kiss - my new poem

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2013 1:42 am
by neo-x
God's precious Hana

You rhyme in such a lovely manner

Your intelligence astounds

The love you show others, abounds

And you're a great little poet

Even if you don't quite know it
:cheers: