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My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Sat Oct 05, 2013 5:33 am
by 1over137
Love given
World broken
Word spoken
Love given
Hearts driven
P.S. tiny but big
Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 6:48 am
by WannaLearn
Boom!!!! CANT GET NO BETTER
Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 9:24 am
by B. W.
1over137 wrote:Love given
World broken
Word spoken
Love given
Hearts driven
P.S. tiny but big
Would make a great song
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Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 11:33 am
by Furstentum Liechtenstein
1over137 wrote:Love given
World broken
Word spoken
Love given
Hearts driven
Why does she have all the talent? God isn't fair!
FL
Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 12:32 pm
by 1over137
Come on. Everybody has. You too. Maybe something you do not know about.
Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 1:18 pm
by RickD
Hana, you forgot FL is Canadian.
Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 1:44 pm
by RickD
I must apologize to FL for saying he's not gifted because he's Canadian. I forgot that all Canadians are adept at beer drinking, hockey watching, and igloo making. Oh, and polar bear breeding.
Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 10:28 pm
by 1over137
Rick, I believe FL will tell you something back
Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Tue Oct 08, 2013 7:02 am
by Furstentum Liechtenstein
RickD wrote:I must apologize to FL for saying he's not gifted because he's Canadian. I forgot that all Canadians are adept at beer drinking, hockey watching, and igloo making. Oh, and polar bear breeding.
Here is my poem:
Ode To Canada
Didn't get our Welfare money
It didn't come in th' mail, Honey
But we don't need to worry
Medical bills we don't got to pay
'cause this is Canada, eh?
With Barack's Obamacare
Ya still gotta pay your share
So Americans can't be sick
Without being hit by a brick...
+ + +
Move over, Queen of Slobovia. There's a new talent in poetry.
FL
Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Tue Oct 08, 2013 2:11 pm
by RickD
With Barack's Obamacare
Ya still gotta pay your share
So Americans can't be sick
Without being hit by a brick...
Ain't that the truth!
If you think healthcare is expensive
now, just wait until it's "free"!
Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Tue Oct 08, 2013 2:17 pm
by RickD
Roses are grey
Violets are grey
I am a dog
Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Tue Oct 08, 2013 2:57 pm
by RickD
Here's one that really hits home, right FL?
Roses are red
violets are blue
I am schizophrenic
and so am I
Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Tue Oct 08, 2013 7:31 pm
by Danieltwotwenty
Love the poem Hana, what I love about it is it's simplicity and the story it tells with that simplicity.
God is truly love and love is never complicated, only we make it complicated.
Re: My tiny poem: Love given
Posted: Tue Oct 08, 2013 10:28 pm
by 1over137
Danieltwotwenty wrote:Love the poem Hana, what I love about it is it's simplicity and the story it tells with that simplicity.
God is truly love and love is never complicated, only we make it complicated.
Thank you Dan