Poem - Imagine

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Poem - Imagine

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Imagine

Imagine the times in heaven
When there's no hungry wolfish ravens
Which may sometimes be in us
Thus may friendships go to dust.

Imagine there's only laughter
Imagine that all are after
Loving others, spreading joy
Non-interested in the ploys.

Imagine all in one accord
No one having his own record
All wrong-doings are forgiven
All people are warm-heart-driven.

Imagine this one day comes true
Isn't that a wonderful view?
Isn't that what we are after?
Love, compassion, friendship, laughter?

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P.S.: let me know when there's some English grammatical error.
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21

For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6

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I think it's a beautiful poem, Heartfelt and your expression, thank you for sharing it.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
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melanie wrote:I think it's a beautiful poem, Heartfelt and your expression, thank you for sharing it.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
Thank you.
I have some more in this General Chit Chat too.
Whole collection is on my homepage. Just check my profile.
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21

For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6

#foreverinmyheart
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Nice poem! Your English is good.

FL :teacher:
Hold everything lightly. If you don't, it will hurt when God pries your fingers loose as He takes it from you. -Corrie Ten Boom

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1over137 wrote:
melanie wrote:I think it's a beautiful poem, Heartfelt and your expression, thank you for sharing it.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
Thank you.
I have some more in this General Chit Chat too.
Whole collection is on my homepage. Just check my profile.
I read them, they are really good :)
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Furstentum Liechtenstein wrote:Nice poem! Your English is good.

FL :teacher:
Thanks teacher FL
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21

For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6

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melanie wrote:
1over137 wrote:
melanie wrote:I think it's a beautiful poem, Heartfelt and your expression, thank you for sharing it.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
Thank you.
I have some more in this General Chit Chat too.
Whole collection is on my homepage. Just check my profile.
I read them, they are really good :)
Thank you.

I started writing poems after I became Christian.
But examine everything carefully; hold fast to that which is good.
-- 1 Thessalonians 5:21

For I am confident of this very thing, that He who began a good work in you will perfect it until the day of Christ Jesus.
-- Philippians 1:6

#foreverinmyheart
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