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Poem - Imagine
Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2014 5:08 am
by 1over137
Imagine
Imagine the times in heaven
When there's no hungry wolfish ravens
Which may sometimes be in us
Thus may friendships go to dust.
Imagine there's only laughter
Imagine that all are after
Loving others, spreading joy
Non-interested in the ploys.
Imagine all in one accord
No one having his own record
All wrong-doings are forgiven
All people are warm-heart-driven.
Imagine this one day comes true
Isn't that a wonderful view?
Isn't that what we are after?
Love, compassion, friendship, laughter?
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P.S.: let me know when there's some English grammatical error.
Re: Poem - Imagine
Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2014 5:32 am
by melanie
I think it's a beautiful poem, Heartfelt and your expression, thank you for sharing it.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
Re: Poem - Imagine
Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2014 11:58 am
by 1over137
melanie wrote:I think it's a beautiful poem, Heartfelt and your expression, thank you for sharing it.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
Thank you.
I have some more in this General Chit Chat too.
Whole collection is on my homepage. Just check my profile.
Re: Poem - Imagine
Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2014 2:43 pm
by Furstentum Liechtenstein
Nice poem! Your English is good.
FL
Re: Poem - Imagine
Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2014 7:55 pm
by melanie
1over137 wrote:melanie wrote:I think it's a beautiful poem, Heartfelt and your expression, thank you for sharing it.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
Thank you.
I have some more in this General Chit Chat too.
Whole collection is on my homepage. Just check my profile.
I read them, they are really good
Re: Poem - Imagine
Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2014 9:30 pm
by 1over137
Furstentum Liechtenstein wrote:Nice poem! Your English is good.
FL
Thanks teacher FL
Re: Poem - Imagine
Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2014 9:31 pm
by 1over137
melanie wrote:1over137 wrote:melanie wrote:I think it's a beautiful poem, Heartfelt and your expression, thank you for sharing it.
I admire the courage it takes to speak from the soul,I would love to hear your other poems Hana.
Thank you.
I have some more in this General Chit Chat too.
Whole collection is on my homepage. Just check my profile.
I read them, they are really good
Thank you.
I started writing poems after I became Christian.