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Grammar question

Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 5:22 pm
by RickD
Is this sentence grammatically correct?
Then your wife asked you if it was comfortable sleeping in the dog house.

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 6:02 pm
by Storyteller
Yes.

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 8:19 pm
by IceMobster
Yes.

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sun May 15, 2016 7:11 am
by Audie
IceMobster wrote:Yes.
Explain why it does not call for the subjunctive form.

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sun May 15, 2016 7:44 am
by IceMobster
Audie wrote:
IceMobster wrote:Yes.
Explain why it does not call for the subjunctive form.
I have no idea what that is, however, the sentence seems grammatically correct to me. Don't know about esthetics concerning sentences, though.

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sun May 15, 2016 7:52 am
by melanie
Then your wife asked you if it was comfortable sleeping in the dog house

Then your wife asked if it was comfortable sleeping in the dog house.
Technically the use of 'you' is unnecessary in the sentence :esmile:

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sun May 15, 2016 8:23 am
by Audie
IceMobster wrote:
Audie wrote:
IceMobster wrote:Yes.
Explain why it does not call for the subjunctive form.
I have no idea what that is, however, the sentence seems grammatically correct to me. Don't know about esthetics concerning sentences, though.
Then you are not qualified to say if it is correct or not.

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sun May 15, 2016 8:27 am
by Audie
melanie wrote:Then your wife asked you if it was comfortable sleeping in the dog house

Then your wife asked if it was comfortable sleeping in the dog house.
Technically the use of 'you' is unnecessary in the sentence :esmile:
Would you , then, say "...if you was comfortable.." ?

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sun May 15, 2016 8:41 am
by melanie
The use of your denotes the use for you.
I would reply no, I much prefer the bed :mrgreen:

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sun May 15, 2016 9:43 am
by hughfarey
The word 'grammar' is a bit of a catch-all term, and often cannot be interpreted in terms of correct or incorrect. In the sentence, "Then your wife asked you if it was comfortable sleeping in the dog house", the noun phrase 'sleeping in the dog house' is first replaced by 'it', and then added anyway, which is clumsy, if not syntactically wrong. It would be better to rewrite it "Then your wife asked you if sleeping in the dog house was comfortable." I disagree with Melanie. Your wife could have asked anybody, so unless the context was obvious, the word 'you' adds considerable meaning to the sentence. Further, the word 'if' does not automatically call for a subjunctive, which denotes a degree of uncertainty. In this case, it seems that you had already spent the night in the doghouse, and could tell her whether it was comfortable or not. I suppose "Then your wife asked you if sleeping in the dog house were comfortable" could imply that she was asking your advice about something you had not actually experienced. The sentence could also say "Then your wife asked you if you were comfortable sleeping in the dog house", which has a slightly different meaning again, without being incorrect grammatically, as 'sleeping in the doghouse' is now an adverbial phrase. I don't think "...if you was comfortable..." could ever be correct, except in certain dialects.

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sun May 15, 2016 10:03 am
by IceMobster
Audie wrote:
IceMobster wrote:
Audie wrote:
IceMobster wrote:Yes.
Explain why it does not call for the subjunctive form.
I have no idea what that is, however, the sentence seems grammatically correct to me. Don't know about esthetics concerning sentences, though.
Then you are not qualified to say if it is correct or not.
Well, is it correct or not, then?

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sun May 15, 2016 11:31 am
by Audie
IceMobster wrote:
Audie wrote:
IceMobster wrote:
Audie wrote:
IceMobster wrote:Yes.
Explain why it does not call for the subjunctive form.
I have no idea what that is, however, the sentence seems grammatically correct to me. Don't know about esthetics concerning sentences, though.
Then you are not qualified to say if it is correct or not.
Well, is it correct or not, then?

I already said it is wrong, and you already said you are not familiar with use of the subjunctive.

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sun May 15, 2016 1:13 pm
by IceMobster
Audie wrote:I already said it is wrong, and you already said you are not familiar with use of the subjunctive.
Fine, do you mind saying what is wrong and correcting it, then?

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sun May 15, 2016 2:05 pm
by RickD
IceMobster wrote:
Audie wrote:I already said it is wrong, and you already said you are not familiar with use of the subjunctive.
Fine, do you mind saying what is wrong and correcting it, then?
She thinks by changing 'was' to 'were' it makes it correct.

Mine:
Then your wife asked you if it was comfortable sleeping in the dog house.
Audie's:
Then your wife asked you if it were comfortable sleeping in the dog house.
But the argument isn't if her sentence is correct, only if mine is incorrect.

Keep in mind the context. My sentence was a response to Jac's joke here:
Jac wrote:
My wife asked me if her dress made her look fat. I told her no, the second helping at every meal was doing that. (Then the fight started.)
My response:
Then your wife asked you if it was comfortable sleeping in the dog house.
Then Audie said 'was' should be 'were'.

Re: Grammar question

Posted: Sun May 15, 2016 2:08 pm
by IceMobster
Both seem good to me.
I also asked a friend from Murica for your sentence and he also says it's grammatically correct.