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poem - Correction

Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 8:22 am
by 1over137
Correction

Having seen my sins
learning the hard way
I must stick much closer
to you I must pray

more often than I used to
more often I should pause
searching what is your will
and not mine because

you know what is needed
we are sometimes lost
then comes time to correct us
sometimes at high cost

Re: poem - Correction

Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 8:41 am
by Mallz
Best one yet

Re: poem - Correction

Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 8:49 am
by RickD
And your English is improving too. :mrgreen:

Re: poem - Correction

Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 8:56 am
by Mallz
I was totally thinking that!

Re: poem - Correction

Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 8:58 am
by Storyteller
Beautiful!

Re: poem - Correction

Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 9:19 am
by 1over137
I have some interaction with Christians
yay
:dancing: :jumping: :clap2: :twodancing: :whee: :clap2: :grouphug:

:)

Re: poem - Correction

Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 10:38 am
by Mallz
:grouphug:

Re: poem - Correction

Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 4:43 pm
by B. W.
1over137 wrote:Correction

Having seen my sins
learning the hard way
I must stick much closer
to you I must pray

more often than I used to
more often I should pause
searching what is your will
and not mine because

you know what is needed
we are sometimes lost
then comes time to correct us
sometimes at high cost
:clap:

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