Evidence for God from Science

Prayer to Father

Please have mercy
give us rest
draw us to home
to your nest

give us love
give us joy
all the bad in us
destroy

Make it happen
that on D-day
miracle comes
so I pray

D-day?

3 june - mri of my husband

is this bad English?

1over137 wrote:is this bad English?

The last strophe?? What is D-day? Last strophe kiiiiinda doesn't make sense. Maybe could be formulated better.

wikipedia:
Normandy landings (codenamed Operation Neptune) were the landing operations on Tuesday, 6 June 1944 (termed D-Day)

maybe D-day really means important date also in English

D-day.

The Normandy landings, yes. You're right though Hana, we do say D-day for an important day. The date of Tomas's mri is a kind of D-day.



Great poem btw. Really, really moving

thank you Annette

Storyteller wrote:

Yeah I know what D-day is, but I didn't think it is also used for an important day. Never heard of it. Seems weird to be in a prayer, but that is just me.

Weirdo

The whole prayer is about Hanas D-day.

3rd June.
The mri scan.

Storyteller wrote:Weirdo

The whole prayer is about Hanas D-day.

3rd June.
The mri scan.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah...

D-day is slowly coming and with it feelings in family connected to it

Love you x